There are only two things about proportion that strike me: I'm not entirely sure whether it just looks like this due to the slightly tilted perspective, but the handle seems a bit too short to fit a hand comfortably. Apart from that I'd also make the trigger guard a bit more filigree, it looks quite massive currently.
I still need to cut in the thumb groove on the grip, and model the clip for the bottom of the handle. I lengthened the handle and thinned the trigger guard. I was thinking of thickening the grip pads, but they will probably be covered by the character's hand so I'm not sure if that's necessary. Let me know if there's anything else you would like to change.
Do I need to model the entire ammo clip for a reloading animation?
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Yes, you will need to make a clip for it. By the way, I'm seriously impressed with how this is coming out! Viech will give you fuller feedback once he wakes up, but I must say that this really looks great. Can't wait to see your texture job later.
Is it just me or is the diameter of the barrel a bit small?
In would also maybe try to streamline the profile a bit. Looking at it from the business end there are lots of details/contours that look like they would snag on a holster or clothing.